Tuesday, December 15, 2009

blinterin lunt -
hure: her neb a
mamentary brichtness




flickering match -
prostitute: her face a
momentary brightness

6 comments:

  1. By God, you've been there too??

    hey, kidding...a Van Gogh hiding in these lines! :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. -Momentary brightness- juxtaposes the time spent with the 'hure...' momentary.

    Interesting, John. _m

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  3. I enjoy your diverse subject matter - you certainly take this form further than most

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  4. Certainly Dalloway...John, you and several others take this form to more heights.....In between, hope people like me has a "decent" space too :)

    John, thanks for the space :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. people like me have == an error!

    btw, i quite know that the space is what we create -- But still :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  6. this is so perceptive, well done John

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