Saturday, January 17, 2009

wund stourin
throuch the causey - bairns
haudin thair cots lik weengs




wind racing
through the street - children
holding their coats like wings

10 comments:

  1. A terrific visual and haiku, John!

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  2. A striking imagery, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. captures that natural instinct in children

    much love
    gillena

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  4. That joyful wind!

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  5. I thank for this spur to my memory, John_! I recall as a child I'd spread my jacket before the wind... while ice skating. Wheee!
    _m

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  6. A happy winter moment, nicely caught.

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  7. Oh yes - thats exactly what they do. I wonder if they think they might take off.

    Funny, I was writing about children and their coats yesterday.

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