Monday, January 19, 2009

furst snawfaw -
ilka brainch laidit
wi a ghaistly yin




first snowfall -
each branch laden
with a ghostly one

6 comments:

  1. agree, a haunting image John

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. it does feel like that...
    great visual

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  3. Wow! That`s a good haiku!
    Line 3 is a real surprise.

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  4. Ohhh - very good, it's almost like double vision.

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