Thursday, December 11, 2008

neist
the reid geranium
the auld bawdrons gantin




next to
the red geranium
the old cat yawning

8 comments:

  1. oh, I read it and `saw` the cat`s red tongue!

    this "red" from line 2 made it!...

    well done!

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  2. interesting in more than one way, John :)


    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Nice, John.

    Interesting to personify the cat with boredom (my read - not necessarily your intent) in the face of a vibrant red blossom.

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  4. Yawning, indeed! Look how many of us were moved to respond. Well done!

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  5. the cat is old,
    the flower is in blossom,
    someone saw all this,
    -who is old?


    but also agree all comments

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  6. Great moment, John

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