oh, I read it and `saw` the cat`s red tongue!this "red" from line 2 made it!...well done!
interesting in more than one way, John :)wishes, devika
Nice, John.Interesting to personify the cat with boredom (my read - not necessarily your intent) in the face of a vibrant red blossom.
Yawning, indeed! Look how many of us were moved to respond. Well done!
peace here...
the cat is old, the flower is in blossom, someone saw all this, -who is old?but also agree all comments
i can see him ;)
Great moment, John
oh, I read it and `saw` the cat`s red tongue!
ReplyDeletethis "red" from line 2 made it!...
well done!
interesting in more than one way, John :)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
Nice, John.
ReplyDeleteInteresting to personify the cat with boredom (my read - not necessarily your intent) in the face of a vibrant red blossom.
Yawning, indeed! Look how many of us were moved to respond. Well done!
ReplyDeletepeace here...
ReplyDeletethe cat is old,
ReplyDeletethe flower is in blossom,
someone saw all this,
-who is old?
but also agree all comments
i can see him ;)
ReplyDeleteGreat moment, John
ReplyDelete