Direct and touching.
... he reaches down, and pats an empty space.Full of feeling, John. _m
I`m a cat lover but this haiku touches my heart!the repetitionhis...his...(tears/dog)works very well!
moving...
Touching.
interesting- never thought of that....
Oh sad...but how do you know if that was a dog or a cat from his tears? :)wishes,devika
poignant
Heartbreaking. But beautiful. Sometimes words are redundant.
Direct and touching.
ReplyDelete... he reaches down, and pats an empty space.
ReplyDeleteFull of feeling, John. _m
I`m a cat lover but this haiku touches my heart!
ReplyDeletethe repetition
his...
his...
(tears/dog)
works very well!
moving...
ReplyDeleteTouching.
ReplyDeleteinteresting- never thought of that....
ReplyDeleteOh sad...
ReplyDeletebut how do you know if that was a dog or a cat from his tears? :)
wishes,
devika
poignant
ReplyDeleteHeartbreaking. But beautiful. Sometimes words are redundant.
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