Friday, February 08, 2008

agin the kirkyaird wa
the tide
showdin




against the churchyard wall
the ocean
rocking

5 comments:

  1. A great triptych: The mystery of life. The birds of our innermost beings burning with inner fire. Beyond the church of our formal worship, the secret treasure in the cosmic sea…

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  2. very nice -- Borut said so much! wish I could comment like that -- it's poetic in its own way. :)

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  3. i think 'rocking' is a great choice with all its implications

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  4. I read this first as knocking...
    rip

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