Saturday, February 02, 2008

on ma wa
ma retiral mindin
tinglin the oors...the saiconts




on my wall
my retiral gift
chiming the hours...the seconds

6 comments:

  1. There is something a little sinister about this - perhaps the sense of life counting down, chimes of doom etc. Powerful though!

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  2. very good but somewhat disturbing

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  3. there's a sadness in this, John.

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  4. Good John, I think I have mood in this one, but the actually meaning of the word eludes me, even my dictionaryis helpless.

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  5. Retiral of course, sorry

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  6. Reminding us ...?

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