Friday, February 15, 2008

maws birl
i the sin -
bleck scarts on the burn

gulls wheel
in the sun -
black scribbles on the stream


  1. scribbling with their shadows? wow

  2. I was thinking of something else... :-)

  3. I'm working on a rather long blog/article about short poetry and in doing my research I stumbled across your site as you do.

    You have a nice approach to your subject matter and I'd like to quote this one if you've no objections and add a link.

    I don't labour the Scottishness on my blog but I like to promote fellow Scots when I can.

    Don't hold your breath by the way, I write my blogs weeks in advance.