Tuesday, July 24, 2007

threids on ma neb -
reengin fir'm
a'm snaggit in's wab




threads on my face -
searching for him
I'm caught in his web

5 comments:

  1. no harm done as long as you're not a fly (the spider would disagree, i'm sure) :)

    of course it also works on a metaphorical level

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  2. Well done. I like Polona's remark.

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  3. I know how it feels to be in the hands of a Charlie Spider!?:)

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  4. This had me thinking about you as John, and the narrator as another you, a fly or other creature perhaps. I like it a lot!

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