Saturday, July 21, 2007

lown chattert -
a snail unnerfuit
i the lang girse




silence shattered -
a snail underfoot
in the long grass

5 comments:

  1. not the most pleasant thought, but such a wonderful haiku. :)

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  2. awwwww...
    excellent haiku!

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  3. Good one. If only they could warn us they are there. Lots about at the moment, they are loving this rain.

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  4. Shattering one to pieces!

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