Wednesday, June 13, 2007

the fisher
kestin's piece-box
catchit a burd




the fisherman
casting his sandwich-box
caught a bird

4 comments:

  1. Very amusing (I assume 'burd' is 'bird'?).

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  2. you are so good with line 3! :)

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  3. LOL I did - very good John

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  4. The scottish (original?) is very nice, especially i like the word 'fisher' = fisherman. Also in Finnish that '-man- is not needed!

    And also I like the 3rd line...

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