Saturday, June 09, 2007

aw day
sneddin treen -
a bog on ma pillae




all day
pruning trees -
a bug on my pillow

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  3. dear polona vaugh and andrew thanks for your comments on the original post.I've changed the last line to something that happened later that day I thought it more interesting thanks again
    john

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  4. i like the new take :)

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  5. Dead asleep!? Reminds me of a tick deep in my knee, in the evening, after a day of roaming in the woods...!:)

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