Monday, September 04, 2006

wesp dowps doon
amang the haiku
turns tae yin

wasp sits down
amongst the haiku
becomes one


  1. This one is brilliant!
    Did it really happen?

  2. thanks andrew, yes it happened approx. three hours ago in the garden You can always be sure my haiku happened because I made a promise to myself years ago when I started that I would make my haiku a record of my life and only! write about things that have actually happened to me.

  3. I like that- most of mine are that way. Some of the tanka, though, can take their own path.
    This one reminds me of one of mine from May 21.