Tuesday, September 26, 2006

furst leaves fawin
a laddie stauns
pikein's neb




first leaves falling
a young boy stands
picking his nose

4 comments:

  1. I love this haiku! It's innocent and so true to life, and not a bit precious. It's a great idea having bilingual haiku. I must link to my blog, if that's okay?

    Alan
    Area 17

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  2. delighted alan tell me how to link to yours
    john

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  3. Hi John!

    I'm still learning various things myself! ;-)

    I've sent you an email, and added you as a link.

    Do you have any rugby haiku by the way?

    Alan

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