Thursday, September 07, 2006

frae the winnock
a hairst efternuin -
ma sheddae liggs on the bed




from the window
an autumn afternoon -
my shadow lies on the bed

2 comments:

  1. I like your haiku's - calm and down to simpel daily life (so I think I found a way to interpret them).
    Actually I try to ignore the english version first and try to translate your Scottish first - I almost made it with this one :)

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  2. thanks ashi,how wonderful that you are tackling the scots first: keep at it
    john

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