Thursday, April 26, 2012

a mornin
o pink dubs
alang gean-tree rod




a morning
of pink puddles 
along cherry-tree road

3 comments:

  1. The first two lines are really catch one's attention. Nice one, John...

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  2. ... the puddles reflect; nice, John! _m

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  3. Yeah! A wonderful line2: "..pink puddles"!

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