Monday, April 02, 2012

intae the gairden
a gled  -
stramash o weengs




into the garden
a hawk  -
cacaphony of wings

5 comments:

  1. I think 'stramash' outdoes cacaphony by mile ;) !!!

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  2. stramash
    wings beat against its chest
    hunter hawk

    __I like stramash too. Here, a metaphor of 'thunderous,' and I have -stolen- that scots word.
    __Nice John! _m

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  3. I agree, 'stramash' outdoes cacaphony by mile. Nice set, John...

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  4. good audible appeal

    much love...

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  5. afterwards
    a deep
    silence

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