Monday, February 06, 2012

throuch brainches  -
the sin sneddin
sheddaes oot o the freest




through branches  -
the sun cutting
shadows out of the frost

4 comments:

  1. Very nice, John. The last two lines are very vivid...

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  2. This is great, John. I've seen other poems by other poets about the interaction between sun and snow/frost etc, but you have a unique slant on it here.

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  3. Very tactile - I like the way the sun is sharp rather than the frost.

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