tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post6649258469780653730..comments2024-03-21T04:00:09.881-07:00Comments on zen speug: John McDonaldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-46203183694852787182012-02-17T04:25:34.466-08:002012-02-17T04:25:34.466-08:00Very tactile - I like the way the sun is sharp rat...Very tactile - I like the way the sun is sharp rather than the frost.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-60023802493354464652012-02-14T04:42:28.958-08:002012-02-14T04:42:28.958-08:00This is great, John. I've seen other poems by ...This is great, John. I've seen other poems by other poets about the interaction between sun and snow/frost etc, but you have a unique slant on it here.Dave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-10087158958390256122012-02-06T08:47:44.940-08:002012-02-06T08:47:44.940-08:00sharp!sharp!Gwil Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03305768121713053837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-48192887063794990762012-02-06T06:09:30.767-08:002012-02-06T06:09:30.767-08:00Very nice, John. The last two lines are very vivid...Very nice, John. The last two lines are very vivid...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.com