Thursday, September 22, 2011

a leaf faws  -
chitterin sweels
on the burn




a leaf falls  -
shivering circles
on the stream

6 comments:

  1. Good work, John.'shivering circles' is a nice line...

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  2. happy autumn


    much love...

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  3. Nice one John. Seems to straddle the season - suggestions of winter within an autumnal scene.

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  4. Very good, and "shivering circles" is a treasure.

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  5. Falling into a "shivering circle," and sailing on the breeze. Fine one John. _m

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