Sunday, September 18, 2011

blawin bibbles  -
on mither's chaft
preeins brustin




blowing bubbles  -
on mother's cheek
kisses bursting

3 comments:

  1. ... and one hears as well as sees, mother and infant. Nice John. _m

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  2. First sight: young mother, young child. Second one: grandma's thin skin, and the daughter's baby giving her a smacker ... Fine haiku, John.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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