onward to summermuch love...
helter-skelter was good. good one John :)wishes, devika
sounds great both ways!
A very visual poem John beautifully rendered...
Birds... in all directions!Fine sight John! _m
wonderful weekend fairs springing up - ran many a hill race John, but was never so swift :)
Ha ha... causing an inner giggle.
Fabulous! Swifts are probably my favourite bird, but even so, this is one of the best haiku I have read this year. Good stuff.
I just re-read the Scots version. Love all 6 syllables of it
onward to summer
ReplyDeletemuch love...
helter-skelter was good. good one John :)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
sounds great both ways!
ReplyDeleteA very visual poem John beautifully rendered...
ReplyDeleteBirds... in all directions!
ReplyDeleteFine sight John!
_m
wonderful weekend fairs springing up - ran many a hill race John, but was never so swift :)
ReplyDeleteHa ha... causing an inner giggle.
ReplyDeleteFabulous! Swifts are probably my favourite bird, but even so, this is one of the best haiku I have read this year. Good stuff.
ReplyDeleteI just re-read the Scots version. Love all 6 syllables of it
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