Wednesday, May 11, 2011

day-daw cushat,
eenin bleckie  -  an atween:
The Magnificat




dawn wood-pigeon,
evening blackbird  -  and between:
The Magnificat


(Clare priory pilgrimage)

8 comments:

  1. oh you are on pligrimage...Greetings, and a good haiku, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. **pilgrimage

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. An effective juxtaposition of images, John..

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  4. Catholic abbey, a garden full of herbs and bushes ... I feel the sun shining on my skin during my meditation. Great haiku, John. And yes, a very fine juxtaposition.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. nice haiku; you could have presented it also in four lines

    much love...

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  6. The sight and sounds, nicely sent, John. _m

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  7. Very nice. Really captures the spirit of the moment.

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