Monday, March 07, 2011

bleck bawdrons
skews tae leuk -
yalla o daffins




black cat
turns to look -
yellow of daffodils

6 comments:

  1. good buzz!
    like the strong contrast in colour

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  2. There is a subtile danger in these lines. Especially the Scots haiku with its alliteration in line one and its sharp line three. Good one, John.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  3. and maybe a squint of yellow eyes and soft meows

    much love...

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  4. __Good John... love the thought's wander to... the black face and the daffin eyes. _m

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  5. Excellent poem, John. It reminds me of an old one of yours involving a crow on it's green eggs.

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  6. A cat ku that avoids cuteness. Well done.

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