tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post7688018648959042930..comments2024-03-21T04:00:09.881-07:00Comments on zen speug: John McDonaldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-3006596066634774702011-03-10T09:58:28.296-08:002011-03-10T09:58:28.296-08:00A cat ku that avoids cuteness. Well done.A cat ku that avoids cuteness. Well done.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-47719104716246048372011-03-08T15:40:52.742-08:002011-03-08T15:40:52.742-08:00Excellent poem, John. It reminds me of an old one ...Excellent poem, John. It reminds me of an old one of yours involving a crow on it's green eggs.Dave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-25798259134329111892011-03-07T19:06:09.174-08:002011-03-07T19:06:09.174-08:00__Good John... love the thought's wander to......__Good John... love the thought's wander to... the black face and the daffin eyes. _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-61634030719610745492011-03-07T16:42:11.550-08:002011-03-07T16:42:11.550-08:00and maybe a squint of yellow eyes and soft meows
...and maybe a squint of yellow eyes and soft meows<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-44638487148558471462011-03-07T11:33:57.226-08:002011-03-07T11:33:57.226-08:00There is a subtile danger in these lines. Especial...There is a subtile danger in these lines. Especially the Scots haiku with its alliteration in line one and its sharp line three. Good one, John.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-1660540228099989622011-03-07T06:35:03.303-08:002011-03-07T06:35:03.303-08:00good buzz!
like the strong contrast in colourgood buzz!<br />like the strong contrast in colourGwil Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03305768121713053837noreply@blogger.com