Thursday, December 09, 2010

the tide's stramash
heesht tae a dreep:
eeshogels




the ocean's crashing
muted to a drip:
icicles

7 comments:

  1. very dramatic John, but as always good :)

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  2. You always have something beautiful to say. Lovely and I agree with Ashi, very dramatic

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  3. transience
    now this cold
    silent ocean

    much love
    gillena

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  4. __Water's many masks, the crushing waves... to the silent drip.
    __As always, John, a source of thought! _m

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  5. Some great words again, John. Particularly 'stramash' - brings back memories of Arthur Montford and Scotsport and also a book by a friend of one of my son's http://stramashthebook.com/

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  6. I don't know how I missed this. The Scottish version is great.

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