I love line three! With a smile,Angelika
line 3 well donemuch lovegillena
first thaw teeths chatteringexcuse me for that,nice collection; really loved that "all the trees, one blossom" :)wishes, devika
i mean **teeth wishes,devika
line 3 - a big surprise - kind of threatening somehow
Fine vision, John. _m
and too Dev "teeth's chattering - the chattering of teeth :)couldn't resist this onemuch lovegillena
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Gillena, i understand...but let me clarify with John's permission, my "teeths" was an error because i meant to say plural and missed teeth was the plural of tooth :)and then i left "teeth/chattering" because it conveyed more of the "present" effect of the action...at that point in time (not now)But I agree, the chattering of teeth also works fine...but there's still a light shift about conveying the severity, but basically my usage did not mean to say teeth's chattering...which means the "chattering of teeth"anyway, thanks Gillena...infact my brain is a little slow in storing all the grammatical rules...so it helps (It is a wonder that I am a paid freelance/ghost writer! :)Thanks John for the space, wishes, devika
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