Friday, February 12, 2010

deezie
in a roond o nirls:
the bairn




dizzy
in a circle of crumbs:
the child

8 comments:

  1. ha! good one, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. nice one lots of fond memories

    much love
    gillena

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  3. Good sense of childhood in this one, John.

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  4. "Crumb" makes it a scenery seen by an adult. 'cause to a child all this - is wealth. Very good, John.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. Nice
    (I love "deezie")

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  6. I myself feel dizzy sometimes.. .-)

    dizzy
    in the milky way --
    this global earth

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  7. One good turn... deserves another.

    Nice. _m

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  8. ditto with Gillena, this is a poem ABOUT childhood...

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