Thursday, February 18, 2010

bi the watterside:
sumyin's braith
hauden in a yalla balloon




by the riverside:
someone's breath
held in a yellow balloon

9 comments:

  1. hahaha! LOVE this, can't stop laughing :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Good one, John. A different way of seeing.

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  3. Nice haiku, John...

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  4. really nice

    much love
    gillena

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  5. Spiritual.
    __Every balloon, a hallowed part of the breathing soul that created.
    __I like the double LL use in your special haiku, John!

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  6. I clicked in and saw this-I liked it so much I had to comment.

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  7. A special view, love it John

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  8. Just had the idea that the balloon-filling person had a lot of garlic and the yellow things bursts while I pass by ... uuuuuh. Good one!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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