Thursday, October 02, 2008

skailt sinlicht -
leaves blawn
intae a neuk




scattered sunlight -
leaves blown
into a corner

6 comments:

  1. a beautiful autumn scene

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  2. Lovely picture John

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  3. a very plain image of autumn..
    i feel it!

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  4. Made one suggestion in Finnish:

    Auringon s├Ąteet
    hujan hajan --
    nurkkaan puhaltuneet lehdet

    here L2 'scattered'
    and L3 your L2 + L3

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  5. Ps. L1 also words together:

    Auringons├Ąteet
    hujan hajan --
    nurkkaan puhaltuneet lehdet

    just to make a hay(na)ku!

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