Saturday, October 25, 2008

a leaf faws
fleits doonstream -
a fooneral hauds by




a leaf falls
floats downstream -
a cortege passes

7 comments:

  1. everything has its end... like it

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  2. I like the jux. Softly stated, but clear as a bell.

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  3. good one :-)
    wishes!
    devika

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  4. ..
    the stream stops
    for a while

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  5. This made me stop a while, but it was only when I toke a closer look at the Scottish verse that I got a some sense in it, I think it's actually very deep John.

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