Saturday, April 05, 2008

washin-day -
cluds spuein
...blae unnerweir




washing-day -
clouds billowing
...blue underwear

7 comments:

  1. made me smile :)
    thank you

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  2. Smiling with the crowd. :)

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  3. laundry line
    on this risen wind
    the boxers

    The blue boxers kiteing off to who knows where_! -m

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  4. today i had technical difficulties with my pc but this haiku brought my smile back

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  5. I like your take on wash day sky thinking. Nice one!

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  6. sweet air --
    the whole sky
    swinging!

    .-)

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