Saturday, April 12, 2008

the cailleach's breid -
oot frae tide cluds
maws,weet




the old lady's bread -
out from ocean clouds
gulls, rain

5 comments:

  1. thought-provoking

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  2. Back from a short break, I have the pleasure of reading a sampling of your recent work. Very good overall, and I especially like "dead gull."

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  3. In three lines you've painted a whole scene. Lots to look at. Great.

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