Friday, March 14, 2008

midnicht weet -
on toon plainstanes
colours rin




midnight rain -
on city pavements
colours run

5 comments:

  1. ha, first i read l1 as 'midnight train' - and it works both ways

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  2. Very evocative of time and place

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  3. I dont really do city nights - but I remember this from when I have, its one of the beautiful moments, and the way that streetlight fractures when you squint or look at it through tears.

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  4. Someone is out there, in the rain,
    someone doesn't run but colours are!

    I liked this one, there is a story.

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