Tuesday, January 22, 2008

thowe
dubs creckin -
a greitin bairn's runkilt neb




thaw
puddles cracking -
a crying child's crumpled face

4 comments:

  1. nice, makes me wonder why he's crying...

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  2. so sad!! I just posted a haiga that's about the sadness of winter, but it's not as powerful as yours.

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  3. I think if you had pointed this out to me as a child I would have been terrified. Now I love it!

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