Monday, September 10, 2007

tree's sheddae
hings on the cunyie -
growein shilpit




tree's shadow
leans on the corner -
growing thin

7 comments:

  1. That tree sounds like a human...

    Ps. I love that word 'shilpit'!

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  2. This is full of poetic mood!
    Containing time transferring I feel
    eternity.

    sakuo.

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  3. Very good indeed. You are so adept at coming at things from a new angle, shifting the focus to somewhere far more interesting than the obvious.

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