Wednesday, September 26, 2007

leaves
the colour o deuks' nebs -
amang the deuks' nebs




leaves
the colour of ducks' bills -
among the ducks' bills

3 comments:

  1. And sometimes a little like the shape.

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  2. Nice one. I need to remember this as a lesson in good writing - you dont always have to liken something to something else to give it power.

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