Saturday, April 14, 2007

hover-flee's sheddae
muves ower'r breist:
its lang trams lag




hover-fly's shadow
moves over her breast:
its long legs linger
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6 comments:

  1. Masago7:55 PM

    Yeah, very good.

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  2. Ashi1:04 AM

    love this John

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  3. Anonymous8:00 AM

    Nicely done.

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  4. Anonymous12:35 PM

    A shadow which moves... suspense... a very suggestive description.

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  5. Poulet S.A.7:21 PM

    You are so talented !!!
    All poems are so beautiful ! :))

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  6. J. Andrew Lockhart9:38 PM

    very spring :)

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