I love this! perfect third line.
The force of habit, or an elightened banker!?:
practice makes a man perfect!
This made me smile. Its like a nursery rhyme for the working man.
oh, i love this one!
An excellent use of kigo, a very good surprise! I dare to make a suggestion regarding the prosody: day off / the banker counts / his daffodilsThank you for sharing.
I miss your haiku!
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