Friday, November 24, 2006

throuch the weet
a dowie sang
clinks plash intae's cog




through the rain
a sad song
coins splash into his pail

2 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:31 AM

    But the coins splashing
    means there is at least one
    who is listening the singer!
    Nice and touching!

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  2. nice... i had a similar idea for tonight's senryu

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