Wednesday, August 29, 2018

auld toon squerr  -
a generation hunkert
aneath cluds o fag reek

old town square  -
a generation sitting
beneath clouds of cigarette smoke

1 comment:

  1. __ Just a few days ago, as our paths quietly crossed, a person "lacking civility", publicly shouted out "hello" into her cell phone... my quickly loud answer was... "hello_?" She gave me and my wife, a very ugly and displeased look. I wonder why?
    __ My smiles, in this 'sort of' Cinquain.

    town square
    a person shouts
    hello(!) to her cell phone.
    I answered my return hello;
    she sneered.