Sunday, September 17, 2017

skirlin o brakes  -
speuggies waashin
in a powie




screeching of brakes  -
sparrows bathing
in a pothole

3 comments:

  1. Nice John!
    __ Too, the wet wheels have splattered this thought. _m

    splashed pigeons
    shake water from their wings
    roadside puddle

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    1. I think a puddle can be vaguely termed a "plash."

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  2. Must have good eyesight!

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