Tuesday, August 30, 2016

hairst souch  -
anither year bygaun
...runkles on the burn




autumn breeze  -
another year passing by
...wrinkles on the stream




2 comments:

  1. I like this, John. Has it occurred to you that this would also work

    autumn breeze
    another year
    passing by

    or

    wrinkles on the stream
    another year
    passing by

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  2. As always John, you give the readers a lamp... to see beyond.
    __ We resolve to paddle on... through our river's deeper 'waves'.

    river waves
    deeper wrinkles on my face
    resolution
    _m

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