Monday, June 29, 2015

he sayed he seen
the Almichtie daunce yince
...reid-crooned crans




he said he saw
God dance once
...red-crowned cranes

3 comments:

  1. Two of a kind, very nice.

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  2. On the other hand (with a tip of the hat to Gwil W), two of two very different kinds, but the power of the poem makes us "see" each in the light of the other. Well done, John.

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  3. Interesting piece, great to read.

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