Saturday, September 20, 2014

scuil fecht -
snowkin bluid frae'm
neist day




school fight -
smelling blood from him
next day

5 comments:

  1. Today, this scab begins to seal yesterday's hurt. (seal... heal?)

    Your verse >could< refer to the recent referendum, thus, my senryu as a metaphor that frames my view of politics, especially here in the U.S. .

    the children
    opinions in this sand-box
    politics

    _m

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  2. school days!!! good one John

    much love...

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  3. deepening autumn . . .
    the schoolyard fight I lost
    seventy years ago

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  4. schoolyard fight
    much noise and bloody noses
    - teacher breaks it up

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