Thursday, January 30, 2014

snell -
maggies'
chitterin claiver




bitter cold -
magpies'
chittering chatter

3 comments:

  1. Do they make things colder?

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  2. I like the way the last line ties back to the first - the chattering of teeth, and the double t in the words themselves.

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  3. some great poems recently, John.

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