a fish jumpsthis water ring growingmigrant birds__A haiku echo, 'slowly surfacing' from your nice piece (peace) here John! Thanks for the imaginational spur. _m
crossroadsI resist the temptationto write a haikuGood one, John.
the fish on the hook the struggle to land three lines of haiku nice one John
Nice nod to the past-masters of the tradition in this one. And that's just how it works - a little action and the words start to bubble up.