Friday, June 07, 2013

fush lowpin...
a haiku
slawly hovein




fish jumping...
a haiku
slowly surfacing

4 comments:

  1. a fish jumps
    this water ring growing
    migrant birds

    __A haiku echo, 'slowly surfacing' from your nice piece (peace) here John! Thanks for the imaginational spur. _m

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  2. crossroads
    I resist the temptation
    to write a haiku

    Good one, John.

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  3. the fish
    on the hook
    the struggle to land three lines of haiku


    nice one John

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  4. Nice nod to the past-masters of the tradition in this one. And that's just how it works - a little action and the words start to bubble up.

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