Friday, February 22, 2013

tentie o the sea
runklin the strand -
disjaskit




watching the sea
wrinkling the shore -
feeling my age

5 comments:

  1. Wrinkles in the sand.
    __Nice, John. _m

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  2. really nice, well wrought tidal actions


    much love...

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  3. A great combination if images, John...

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  4. like the line 'wrinkling the shore'. Nice one

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  5. With poetry like yours to ease the way ageing doesn't seem quite so bad!

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