Monday, January 21, 2013

on gruein watters
swans' gentiness
...waarmin




on icy waters
swans' elegance
...warming

4 comments:

  1. I like the openness of this.

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  2. __I'm not a "bird watcher," but I spend hours "watching" birds, the water-birds in particular; the swans are -elegant-.

    __I like this, John, and the -swim- from -icy- to -warming-.

    _m

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  3. Happy Burns Night John!

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