Tuesday, June 26, 2012

the aul chiel hirples alang  - 
the burn
dookin an heavin




the old man limps along  -
the stream
dipping and rising

3 comments:

  1. two age olds, one relentless, one persevering; nice juxtapositioning


    much love...

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  2. A most eloquent visual rhyme.

    I've been unable to post poems or comments for the last couple of weeks.

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  3. Got something in my own mind ... -)

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